Monday 19 September 2016

Room 5 glacier camp

2 comments:

  1. Hi Nikau,
    I like your funny bit where Archie rolled out of bed in the middle of the night! Next time you could explain why the the view was great.

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  2. hi Nikau
    I liked how you made the words clear maybe next time add full stops at all of the sentences.

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