Hello Nikau, It is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added a picture. In our class we have a peice of paper that says everything that we need to put into a blog. I think that you are missing a few things of there. To start off with you could probaly try exsplaing a bit more. You could also try to add maybe some colour next time. But other than that Ka Pai Bridget
Hi I am Albin from YMS. That was really amazing. It reminded me of having a smoothie. You could have made it more amazing by adding some photos of the delicious looking smoothies. Have you made it ? If you have then was it tasty ?
Hello Nikau, I'm Kade from Rimu That was SICK if you know what I mean. Ok stop being stupid. Cool recipe, I might use it. If we have a tin of mangos XD. I hope you reply Good job Kind regards Kade
my name is Maddison I am a year 7 from Yaldhurst Model School.
WoW!!
This blog post was super interesting and it sounded delicious! How many of these smoothie recipes have you made.
I really liked how you added in all of the steeps. I think that the ingredients and the instructions are super important and it is amazing that you added them in.
I think for you to improve you could have added in a video of you making it. Or an imovie. It would also be good if you added in some photos so we can see how it turned out.
This reminds me of the time when I used to make my own smoothie recipe. I have ice cream mixed berries and banana. I think that it is super cool how you reblogged this. What is your favorite fruit?
Hello Nikau,
ReplyDeleteIt is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added a picture. In our class we have a peice of paper that says everything that we need to put into a blog. I think that you are missing a few things of there. To start off with you could probaly try exsplaing a bit more.
You could also try to add maybe some colour next time.
But other than that
Ka Pai
Bridget
Hi
ReplyDeleteI am Albin from YMS.
That was really amazing.
It reminded me of having a smoothie.
You could have made it more amazing by adding some photos of the delicious looking smoothies.
Have you made it ?
If you have then was it tasty ?
Hello Nikau,
ReplyDeleteI'm Kade from Rimu
That was SICK if you know what I mean.
Ok stop being stupid.
Cool recipe, I might use it.
If we have a tin of mangos XD.
I hope you reply
Good job
Kind regards
Kade
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeletemy name is Maddison I am a year 7 from Yaldhurst Model School.
WoW!!
This blog post was super interesting and it sounded delicious!
How many of these smoothie recipes have you made.
I really liked how you added in all of the steeps.
I think that the ingredients and the instructions are super important and it is amazing that you added them in.
I think for you to improve you could have added in a video of you making it. Or an imovie. It would also be good if you added in some photos so we can see how it turned out.
This reminds me of the time when I used to make my own smoothie recipe. I have ice cream mixed berries and banana.
I think that it is super cool how you reblogged this.
What is your favorite fruit?
Kind regards.
-Maddie