Nice work Nikau! This is a really cool poem! You’ve done awesome work on this post!
I definitely think that Neil would have been feeling nervous! I would be so nervous if it was me! Triumphant is also a really good word to describe what it would feel like to land on the moon.
I like how you said dark and eerie! Those are both really good words for describing what it would look and feel like it space!
How do you think you would be feeling? What are some things you would do once you’re on the moon? I would like to try doing flips and things! What about you?
Hi Nikau, Marlin here this was a cool poem about the moon landing and I think make heaps more like this cause your good at these. Keep up the good work Yours truly. Marlin T3
Hi Nikau
ReplyDeleteGreat job.I like how you have chosen a moon as a background.
Keep it up
Molly
thank you for the positive comment
ReplyDeleteKia Ora!
ReplyDeleteNice work Nikau! This is a really cool poem! You’ve done awesome work on this post!
I definitely think that Neil would have been feeling nervous! I would be so nervous if it was me! Triumphant is also a really good word to describe what it would feel like to land on the moon.
I like how you said dark and eerie! Those are both really good words for describing what it would look and feel like it space!
How do you think you would be feeling? What are some things you would do once you’re on the moon? I would like to try doing flips and things! What about you?
Well done on this one Nikau!
Matilda :)
Hi Nikau,
ReplyDeleteMarlin here this was a cool poem about the moon landing and I think make heaps more like this cause your good at these. Keep up the good work
Yours truly.
Marlin T3