This is a very impressive piece of writing. I just loved reading it. You tell a very good story! I can just imagine you standing in front of an audience retelling this story and everyone would be sitting on the edge of their seats waiting to hear how it ends! Well done the language that you use it fantastic. As always another great story from you! I certainly hope you will retell a story again for Speech board exams this year. This really is your strength! Keep up the awesome work!
Hi Nikau
ReplyDeleteThis is a very impressive piece of writing. I just loved reading it. You tell a very good story! I can just imagine you standing in front of an audience retelling this story and everyone would be sitting on the edge of their seats waiting to hear how it ends!
Well done the language that you use it fantastic. As always another great story from you!
I certainly hope you will retell a story again for Speech board exams this year. This really is your strength!
Keep up the awesome work!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)