WALT: Visualise and write about an experience
This week for wriitng we had to write about the experience of waking up on a school morning. I liked this activity because I got to tell the reader how I felt in the morning and how my mum reacted to how I felt.
As you can probably tell I am NOT a fan of getting up in the morning! How do you feel about mornings?
Tena koe Nikau! When I first read this I it made me think about when I was a kid and my parents woke me and my siblings up. Dad would walk past our rooms and sing what we call the "Happy song", pretty much it goes "I'm H, A, P, P, Y, I'm H, A, P, P, Y" sometimes if we were really lucky he would flick the light switch on and off for a disco effect. Mum however would just stand at the doorway and stare at us for ages...to see if we were awake...rather creepy really! Your writing also reminded my of one of my favourite authors...Andy Griffiths. It sounds like something his character of Andy would do and the way you set it out with the noises and put things in bold font are similar things to what I see in his books too.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work! Look forward to seeing more of your posts.