Hi Nikau it is Riley here from your class. That is a very good piece of writing. Im not shore were it is but I think it might be somewhere you go swimming. I look forward to finding out where this is. I hope you are having a good time with your family during lockdown.
This is a very impressive piece of writing. I just loved reading it. You tell a very good story! I can just imagine you standing in front of an audience retelling this story and everyone would be sitting on the edge of their seats waiting to hear how it ends! Well done the language that you use it fantastic. As always another great story from you! I certainly hope you will retell a story again for Speech board exams this year. This really is your strength! Keep up the awesome work!
Hi Mrs Costello, Thank you for your kind comments. I do enjoy telling stories and entertaining an audience. I will definitely tell a story this year for my speech exam. I might do Kupe or a Maui story. It was great to see you at school on Wednesday. Thanks, Nikau
Hi Nikau it is Riley here from your class.
ReplyDeleteThat is a very good piece of writing. Im not shore were it is but I think it might be somewhere you go swimming. I look forward to finding out where this is.
I hope you are having a good time with your family during lockdown.
Hi there Riley,
DeleteYes you are right. This is about a place I go swimming at in the summer just down the road from my house.
I am having a good time with my family.
See you soon, Nikau
Hi Nikau
ReplyDeleteThis is a very impressive piece of writing. I just loved reading it. You tell a very good story! I can just imagine you standing in front of an audience retelling this story and everyone would be sitting on the edge of their seats waiting to hear how it ends!
Well done the language that you use it fantastic. As always another great story from you!
I certainly hope you will retell a story again for Speech board exams this year. This really is your strength!
Keep up the awesome work!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)
Hi Mrs Costello,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind comments. I do enjoy telling stories and entertaining an audience. I will definitely tell a story this year for my speech exam. I might do Kupe or a Maui story.
It was great to see you at school on Wednesday.
Thanks, Nikau